Photo 17 Jun 7 notes Guys… this really is not a joke. It’s not mine either. This is basically what is wrong with every mlp oc, except not a changling or cyborg ( I think). I think I’ll make a blog were I post the original bad art, improve them, and show my improved version. And, its Cadence. Personally, I think maybe people should frankendoll to be more creative. Its original name was something bland that I can’t remember, so I’ll call her 80’s pony. I’m gonna rename my account BTW, if I can, to make it about Colgate and Minutette. So bye! :)

Guys… this really is not a joke. It’s not mine either. This is basically what is wrong with every mlp oc, except not a changling or cyborg ( I think). I think I’ll make a blog were I post the original bad art, improve them, and show my improved version. And, its Cadence. Personally, I think maybe people should frankendoll to be more creative. Its original name was something bland that I can’t remember, so I’ll call her 80’s pony. I’m gonna rename my account BTW, if I can, to make it about Colgate and Minutette. So bye! :)

Photo 16 Jun 4 notes This is a joke OC I made. Her name’s Drippy Stitches. 
Backstory:
When she was a filly and didn’t have her cutiemark yet, she and her parents got captured (not sure yet who they were captured by yet). Her parents were brutally murdered right in front of her. Strangely they let her live. When she got older, she got depressed and tried to do something that might help get her revenge. So what she did was actually try out some of these demonic sacrifices of the sort, which caused her left eye to go blind, and the power kind of got into her head, and pretty much went insane. so she tried to find the ponies who murdered her parents, and killed them. but because she is crazy and all that, she started to murder random ponies right out of nowhere, and didn’t even get caught. She lives in a small house in the Everfree forest (not by Zecora, though).
So, yeah. This is pretty bad.

This is a joke OC I made. Her name’s Drippy Stitches. 

Backstory:

When she was a filly and didn’t have her cutiemark yet, she and her parents got captured (not sure yet who they were captured by yet). Her parents were brutally murdered right in front of her. Strangely they let her live. When she got older, she got depressed and tried to do something that might help get her revenge. So what she did was actually try out some of these demonic sacrifices of the sort, which caused her left eye to go blind, and the power kind of got into her head, and pretty much went insane. so she tried to find the ponies who murdered her parents, and killed them. but because she is crazy and all that, she started to murder random ponies right out of nowhere, and didn’t even get caught. She lives in a small house in the Everfree forest (not by Zecora, though).

So, yeah. This is pretty bad.

Photo 12 Jun 2 notes 
“Vocal Sing and his aunt Octavia having a coffee time at Sugarcube Corner, also featuring Wildfire.
It’s not usually everyday that he and Octavia would have coffee but mostly because of the conversation betweenthe two. Today’s talk was about Octavia coming late to a re-hearsal and Vocal Sing having a song project to do within2 weeks for Celestia (as usual).”This ponysona is also this guy’s self insert for Vocaloid, and is paired with MikuHatsune. He also knows Tara Strong (as a Pony) AND Lauren Faust (as a pony) and is BFFs with them. 

How the artist could improve:The artist could improve by nixing the crossovers (Vocaloid and… Meta)? Why does he need to be a vocaloid pony, wouldn’t that also make him a robot? Yet he’s completely organic. Also why make Tara Strong and Lauren Faust a pony in the same universe as the mane cast?? That has to be some kind of paradox. Make a seperate OC if you wanna be a Vocaloid, otherwise it gets really confusing. Leaving Tara and Lauren out of it would also be the best choice.
Vocal Sing is a pretty bland name for a my little pony too. It’s better to make a pun or something that rolls off the tongue, “Vocal Sing” is pretty redundant.Why is he so important that he performs for gosh darn Celestia? Also he’s related to Octavia, the resemblance is so uncanny. Just with this short description he shows a lot of “Special Snowflake” traits. He could work with Octavia, sure, maybe, but I doubt she’d be even SLIGHTLY interested in computerized, J-Pop.
Design wise, if you lost the eye-bleeding blue bands on the back of his leg then it wouldn’t be so bad.
Other than the design, I honestly think the author needs to just remake this pony’s backstory from scratch. This ponysona reeks of wishful fulfillment and special snowflakes.

Vocal Sing and his aunt Octavia having a coffee time at Sugarcube Corner, also featuring Wildfire.

It’s not usually everyday that he and Octavia would have coffee but mostly because of the conversation between
the two. Today’s talk was about Octavia coming late to a re-hearsal and Vocal Sing having a song project to do within
2 weeks for Celestia (as usual).”

This ponysona is also this guy’s self insert for Vocaloid, and is paired with MikuHatsune. He also knows Tara Strong (as a Pony) AND Lauren Faust (as a pony) and is BFFs with them. 

How the artist could improve:
The artist could improve by nixing the crossovers (Vocaloid and… Meta)? Why does he need to be a vocaloid pony, wouldn’t that also make him a robot? Yet he’s completely organic. Also why make Tara Strong and Lauren Faust a pony in the same universe as the mane cast?? That has to be some kind of paradox. Make a seperate OC if you wanna be a Vocaloid, otherwise it gets really confusing. Leaving Tara and Lauren out of it would also be the best choice.

Vocal Sing is a pretty bland name for a my little pony too. It’s better to make a pun or something that rolls off the tongue, “Vocal Sing” is pretty redundant.

Why is he so important that he performs for gosh darn Celestia? Also he’s related to Octavia, the resemblance is so uncanny. Just with this short description he shows a lot of “Special Snowflake” traits. He could work with Octavia, sure, maybe, but I doubt she’d be even SLIGHTLY interested in computerized, J-Pop.

Design wise, if you lost the eye-bleeding blue bands on the back of his leg then it wouldn’t be so bad.

Other than the design, I honestly think the author needs to just remake this pony’s backstory from scratch. This ponysona reeks of wishful fulfillment and special snowflakes.

Text 30 May Just a note to everyone whose OC has not been critiqued yet

I’ve been so busy with projects and finals that I haven’t had time for this blog, but school’s ending in two weeks, so I’ll have time then. Thank you all for your patience~

Text 27 May

fiftysacksofsugar asked: Uhh, is it okay to have princess OCs? I have a character named Princess Solstice. She started as a joke OC, but I saw some potential in her and improved her. Now I think she is MUCH better, or at least not as eyebleeding and Mary Sue. I'm not sure people accept princess OCs. Many people who have critiqued my character are like "Princess=instant mary sue" Also, also, also, her purpose is to help change the seasons. Is she legit or should I scrap her? Please help me, I'm in slight denial. ;A;

Not all princesses are bad. It’s just that 90% of them seem to be the “all-powerful alicorn who is Luna and Celestia’s long-lost sister who is better and prettier than both of them combined” type of character.

Text 26 May 4 notes

asklord-ghirahim asked: I find it funny that almost all male pony ocs have the female base.

Photo 23 May 3 notes ( Not Mine )The design is pitchblack, he’s ‘in’ the mane six, has his own element of harmony, boyfriend to applejack, and has overpowered weird pokemon/sonic powers, what is not to love?
Appearently he is NOT a ‘joke’ oc.. Here’s the description of it on deviantart:
my MLP: FiM OC- Nightshade and Applejack.about Nightshade: Nightshade is the son of an Equestrian hero and heroine who disappeared shortly after his birth. Nightshade then moved with his older brother Buck and his grandfather known as Grandaddy to a local peach farm called Smiling Peach Acres (so named for peaches that when ripe have a smile on them). due to his family’s close bond to the Apple family, the two of them combined their reunions. this lead to Nightshade meeting Applejack who became close friends very quickly. his Cutiemark is a blue flame, representing his fiery determination, never give up attitude, and unbreakable willpower (the last of which turns out to be his Element of Harmony). he is the only male pony in the main group. Nightshade hides a scar across his left eye using his long mane (he can still see of course).Nightshade is the fastest runner in Equestria and has many abilities-Ball of Shadows- Nightshade runs to gain up speed, then rolls into a ball covered in his own energy. used for smashing things such as large rocks. this is his favored ability.Tree-Shaker- a running headbutt used for shaking peaches off of trees in the orchards. also good for attacking. Fire Breath- Nightshade inhales deeply and blows out a large cloud of flame.Shade-Blaze- Nightshade runs so fast he is unable to be seen, allowing for fast attacks or confusion of his enemies by running circles around them.Spinning Buckler- while running, Nightshade jumps off of the ground then spins like a drill, and crashes into his enemies.Armor-Transformation- Nightshade focuses his energy and gains durable armor which has three different forms- normal, horned, and blaze.Nightfall Dash- using his maximum speed, nightshade crashes into his enemy and causes a large explosion.Meteor Shower- using his inner power, Nightshade summons meteors to crash down. (it’s unknown if this is magic or not)Riptide Rage- while running over water, Nightshade causes giant waves which crash down on whoever is chasing him.Lightning Burst- a blast of lightning that can be called down, or blasted from Nightshade’s mouth.Black Blizzard- Nightshade Breathes a blast of cold air and snow that freezes enemies.Earth-Breaker- Nightshade uses his high strength to cause a fissure by stomping down his front hooves.Sonic Shade-wave- Lightning’s greatest technique, where he runs so fast he breaks the sound barrier and causes a giant black and red shock wave that destroys everything around him. (similar to Rainbow Dash’s Sonic Rainboom, but goes in many different directions and is used on land)

( Not Mine )The design is pitchblack, he’s ‘in’ the mane six, has his own element of harmony, boyfriend to applejack, and has overpowered weird pokemon/sonic powers, what is not to love?

Appearently he is NOT a ‘joke’ oc.. Here’s the description of it on deviantart:

my MLP: FiM OC- Nightshade and Applejack.
about Nightshade: Nightshade is the son of an Equestrian hero and heroine who disappeared shortly after his birth. Nightshade then moved with his older brother Buck and his grandfather known as Grandaddy to a local peach farm called Smiling Peach Acres (so named for peaches that when ripe have a smile on them). due to his family’s close bond to the Apple family, the two of them combined their reunions. this lead to Nightshade meeting Applejack who became close friends very quickly. his Cutiemark is a blue flame, representing his fiery determination, never give up attitude, and unbreakable willpower (the last of which turns out to be his Element of Harmony). he is the only male pony in the main group. Nightshade hides a scar across his left eye using his long mane (he can still see of course).
Nightshade is the fastest runner in Equestria and has many abilities-

Ball of Shadows- Nightshade runs to gain up speed, then rolls into a ball covered in his own energy. used for smashing things such as large rocks. this is his favored ability.
Tree-Shaker- a running headbutt used for shaking peaches off of trees in the orchards. also good for attacking.
Fire Breath- Nightshade inhales deeply and blows out a large cloud of flame.
Shade-Blaze- Nightshade runs so fast he is unable to be seen, allowing for fast attacks or confusion of his enemies by running circles around them.
Spinning Buckler- while running, Nightshade jumps off of the ground then spins like a drill, and crashes into his enemies.
Armor-Transformation- Nightshade focuses his energy and gains durable armor which has three different forms- normal, horned, and blaze.
Nightfall Dash- using his maximum speed, nightshade crashes into his enemy and causes a large explosion.
Meteor Shower- using his inner power, Nightshade summons meteors to crash down. (it’s unknown if this is magic or not)
Riptide Rage- while running over water, Nightshade causes giant waves which crash down on whoever is chasing him.
Lightning Burst- a blast of lightning that can be called down, or blasted from Nightshade’s mouth.
Black Blizzard- Nightshade Breathes a blast of cold air and snow that freezes enemies.
Earth-Breaker- Nightshade uses his high strength to cause a fissure by stomping down his front hooves.
Sonic Shade-wave- Lightning’s greatest technique, where he runs so fast he breaks the sound barrier and causes a giant black and red shock wave that destroys everything around him. (similar to Rainbow Dash’s Sonic Rainboom, but goes in many different directions and is used on land)

Photo 21 May 4 notes This is a pony, she does stuff. Her name is Name. Yep. Continue on with life on Earth. 

This is a pony, she does stuff. Her name is Name. Yep. Continue on with life on Earth. 

Photo 16 May 5 notes This is my joke OC Princess Spectraspazzmatic.That is all.

This is my joke OC Princess Spectraspazzmatic.

That is all.

Photo 15 May 7 notes This is a completely serious and legitimate character and if you say anything negative I will call my internet lawyers and have them come after you! 
This is Princess Butter-cup, the ruler of Fridgeonia she has ram horns cause f-you that’s why. She is a magical fairy princess who makes salted butter unsalted and unsalted butter salted. She has a mighty scorpion tail because she is an awesome fighter and needed moar weapons. She is awesome and cool and better than Celestia and Luna. 

This is a completely serious and legitimate character and if you say anything negative I will call my internet lawyers and have them come after you! 

This is Princess Butter-cup, the ruler of Fridgeonia she has ram horns cause f-you that’s why. She is a magical fairy princess who makes salted butter unsalted and unsalted butter salted. She has a mighty scorpion tail because she is an awesome fighter and needed moar weapons. She is awesome and cool and better than Celestia and Luna. 


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